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Friday 27 February 2015

softball


Hi today  we done writing and this is my writing.

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  1. Wow Demetrius you have written a lot of ideas in your recount. I feel like I was know exactly what happened on your soft ball day. It would be great if you could include some more adjectives. I'd like to know how you felt when you were pitching because I think if it was me I'd have butterflies in my stomach.

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