WALT:make a appropriate rap for public blogging
Demetrius is my name
Demetrius is my name
I have a lot of fame
I wish I had a pool
Then I will be cool
I go to tamaki primary school
When I eat my lunch I begin to be full
My friend's name is toma
He likes to use a comma
I like to catch lots of trains
Only when it rains.
Hi Demetriuse like the rhyming words you used like the way you used my name in the poem but you just needed to use a capital letter for Toma keep up the work but just re-read it to check if you got capital letter and make sure it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteHi Demetriuse like the rhyming words you used like the way you used my name in the poem but you just needed to use a capital letter for Toma keep up the work but just re-read it to check if you got capital letter and make sure it makes sense.
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